Today

 
       
 
Oct 10, 2018, 11:38 AM

Today
Verse
I keep looking for deeper meanings
In words that people say.
I keep looking for rays of sunlight.
But clouds get in my way.
Pre chorus
I’m hoping there’s more to life
Than living it day to day.
I keep looking for rays of sunlight.
But clouds get in my way.
Chorus
They laugh, they smile, they don’t need more
They live in today.
They get the most out of their time
They live in today.
Verse
I keep hoping for some clarity
Some light to guide my way.
I keep searching for greener pastures
Find fences in my way.
Pre chorus
I’m hoping there’s more to life
Than living it day to day.
I keep searching for greener pastures
Find fences in my way.
Chorus
They laugh, they smile, they don’t need more
They live in today.
They get the most out of their time
They live in today.
Verse
  I’ve been pleading with God for answers.
I don’t hear what he says.
I keep looking for better answers.
Seems I’ve lost my way.
Pre chorus
I’m hoping there’s more to life
Than living it day to day.
I keep looking for better answers.
Seems I’ve lost my way.
Chorus
They laugh, they smile, they don’t need more
They live in today.
They get the most out of their time
They live in today.

 
     
carroll kiphen Joined Feb 22, 2016
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Oct 15, 2018, 05:08 PM

Carroll this quite good have highlighted my changes in Capitals > hope that is ok with you >john

carroll kiphen - 10 October 2018 11:38 AM

Today
Verse
I keep looking for deeper meanings
In words that people say.
I keep looking for THE sunlight.           
But clouds get in my way.
Pre chorus

I’m hoping there’s more to life
Than JUST living it day to day.
I keep looking for THE sunlight.
But clouds get in my way.
Chorus

They laugh, they smile,
THEY DON’T NEED MORE
THAN live in today.
They MAKE THE most
out of their LIVES
JUST LIVING in today.

Verse
I keep hoping for some clarity
Some light to guide my way.
I keep searching for greener pastures
Find fences BLOCK my way.

Pre chorus
I’m hoping there’s more to life
Than living it day to day.
I keep searching for greener pastures
Find fences in my way.

Chorus
They laugh, they smile, they don’t need more
They live in today.
They get the most out of their time
They live in today.
Verse

I’ve been ASKING God for answers.
I don’t hear what he says.
I NEED A BETTER QUESTION
SOMEHOW I’ve lost my way.
Pre chorus

I’m hoping there’s more to life
Than living it day to day.
I keep looking for better answers.
Seems I’ve lost my way.
Chorus

They laugh, they smile, they don’t need more
They live in today.
They get the most out of their time
They live in today.

 
     
john morrison Joined Oct 15, 2018
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Oct 15, 2018, 06:18 PM

That’s good! Chorus was too similar to the verses and that fixed it. Want me to list you as a co- write on the lyrics? I’m not a musician. How about you?

 
     
carroll kiphen Joined Feb 22, 2016
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Oct 16, 2018, 12:22 PM

Carroll
thanks . no I don’t play . and no there is no need to put co-write I only helped a bit . you would have figured it out on your own
john

 
     
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