I’m alone

 
       
 
Oct 16, 2018, 12:42 PM

J Morrison (c)  wrote this a while ago .

it’s not raining but my eyes are wet
I keep drinking but I’m not drunk yet
don’t want to remember but can’t forget
your gone we’re done
and I’m alone


an empty bed filled with memories
us making love you waking up with me
now it’s just somewhere I go to sleep
your gone we’re done
and I’m alone

I don’t know where you’ve gone
I don’t know why we’re done
but I know I’m alone

are you with someone new
do they love you like I do
I don’t know
but I know
yes I know

Music

you’re gone we’re done
and I’m alone


the bottles empty now so am I
no tears left they’ve all run dry
I wonder where and wonder why
you’ve gone we’re done
and I’m alooooone


you’re gone
and I’m alone

 
     
john morrison Joined Oct 15, 2018
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Oct 16, 2018, 06:42 PM

Hello John,

Good to see you posting.  I am curious as to what genre you are writing these lyrics in, and what mood you hear the music in your mind.  Break up lyrics are sometimes hard to compose to if the musician doesn’t get some ideas from the lyric writer, (but sometimes it does just fall into place with luck).  You have some good visuals in your lines, and it feels good to me with the “gone done alone” repetitions through out the lyric.  I have had a little luck putting up beat melodies to other wise sad situations, might be something to consider.  https://soundcloud.com/user-295053414/last-in-line-for-lovewma , if you are interested in listening to a collaboration with Carroll Kiphen and I.  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon,

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Deacon Joined Aug 30, 2009
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Oct 17, 2018, 12:27 PM

Deacon
thanks for read and reply
hear it as a slow country thing,
dadee dadee dadee da da da  

then a bit more energy on
I don’t know where you’ve gone
section down to the music break
that is as close to music as I can get

john

 
     
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