Still counting

 
       
 
Oct 18, 2018, 06:23 AM

Please help me!
I know The text is not grammatically correct, and the text is not complete.
This song is about my previous game abuse; which I am free from!
Take a look at the first werse ”I living way beyond”
Need some tips to replace that Sentence

If u have other tips; Please tell me!


I lived with a lie, I living way beyond.
I lost all my money, and sell my soul.

When the good times is gone, and the
Bad ones goes by, Then I realized
What I’ve done.

I tried to make a change and tried to think
In other paths. Regret What I have done.
and realized that I was wrong

Refr:
I’m still counting and turn on every coin.
I lived with a lie, I living way beyond.
Regret What I have Done.             
Because I lost all my money, and sell my soul.


I tried to make a difference by getting rich.
and pay my debts. but I became poor!

several thousand have gone by.
When I woke up, I asked myself and wonder why.
live for the day. but now I live with my head high

Refr:
I’m still counting and turn on every coin.
Because I lost all my money, and sell my soul.


I lived with a lie, I living way beyond.
I lost all my money, and sell my soul.

When the good times is gone, and the
Bad ones goes by, Then I realized
What I’ve done.

Refr:
I’m still counting and turn on every coin.
Because I lost all my money, and sell my soul.

 
     
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Oct 18, 2018, 09:35 AM

I lived with a lie! I WAS living way beyond.
I lost all my money, and SOLD my soul.

When the good times WERE gone, and the
Bad ones WENT by, Then I realized
What I HAD done.

I tried to make a change and tried to think
In other paths. (I) regret What I have done.
and REALIZE that I was wrong

Refr:
I’m still counting and turn on every coin.
I lived with a lie! I WAS living way beyond.
(I) regret What I have Done.         
I lost all my money, and SOLD my soul.


I tried to make a difference by getting rich.
and pay my debts. but I became poor!

Several thousand have gone by.
When I woke up, I asked myself and wonderED why.
I WAS livING for the day. Now I live with my head high

Refr:
I’m still counting and turn on every coin.
I lost all my money, and SOLD my soul.


I lived with a lie. I WAS living way beyond.
I lost all my money, and SOLD my soul.

When the good times WERE gone, and the
Bad ones WENT by, Then I realized
What I HAD done.

Refr:
I’m still counting and turn on every coin.
I lost all my money, and SOLD my soul.

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