A Moon without Sun

 
       
 
Nov 13, 2018, 03:40 PM

With this song, I wanted to create a landscape crossed by a river, the river of lost dreams and illuminated by a moon without sun in a dream vision and with a rhythm that changes the color to the lyrics.
I apologize to those who are bothered by my mistakes in English, this video, as the others that are already in Youtube, I can not correct it but I can modify them in Vimeo, replacing them, a great tool, es estupenda esta herramienta.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pMZOlbyJnrU

Sometimes I see a river full of dreams…
shipwrecked,
and I count them one by one,
one by one,
wondering, wondering,
why, why, why, why, why, why…

Sometimes I dream of a river full of dreams…
shipwrecked,
shipwrecked, shipwrecked,
and I count them one by one,
one by one,

as if they were little fish
that go looking for their mother,
their mother…

River of dreams
shipwrecked,
River of dreams
shipwrecked,
shipwrecked, shipwrecked,

River of lost dreams
watering sleeping fields
under a moon without sun
that only gives them its cold,
its cold, its cold,

River of lost dreams
watering sleeping fields
under a moon without sun
that only gives them its cold,
its cold, its cold,

River of past waters
that nevertheless has a course
and never stays dry
or without fish to count,
or without fish to count

I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
My Youtube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow

 
     
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Mora Amaro Joined Oct 19, 2017
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Nov 14, 2018, 11:24 AM

I enjoyed the video very much. You create great pictures and atmospheric soundscapes. Very haunting.

Oh, and the English - impeccable!

 
     
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Gavin Sinclair Joined Dec 02, 2014
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Nov 29, 2018, 05:48 AM

Hi, Mora!

I enjoyed this track a lot, I like overall club atmosphere very much!
Perfect tune for chillout, and for after-party =)

I think you can place the vocal a little distant in the mix, and add some echo/reverb.
I think the idea implies slight detachment of the singer.

Good job, thank you for sharing!

 
     
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Alexey Zhabinsky Joined Aug 01, 2018
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Dec 06, 2018, 08:32 PM

Hi Gavin and Alexey! Many thanks, you are very kind.

I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
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Dec 11, 2018, 03:17 AM

Hello Mora. My friend Otto Kristen just posted his translation of a Spanish poem, recited in an audio link. I thought you might like it.

http://www.songwriter101.com/forums/viewthread/78620/P510/

There will always be another song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? http://www.garyeandrews.com

 
     
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Dec 11, 2018, 05:21 AM
Gary E. Andrews - 11 December 2018 03:17 AM

Hello Mora. My friend Otto Kristen just posted his translation of a Spanish poem, recited in an audio link. I thought you might like it.

http://www.songwriter101.com/forums/viewthread/78620/P510/

Hello Gary. I had already seen that video with the translation made by your friend. It is always beautiful to read and listen to the water that comes from the soul,Another day I will send your friend the well-written Spanish text since the text in Spanish that appears in the video is incorrectly written.

Today I leave you a poetry also in Spanish entitled Things “Cosas”.
Below the translation. Maybe one of you is interested in playing music.

Thank you!

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