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Bob (He’ll Never Go Far)

 
       
 
Feb 26, 2019, 05:25 PM

A song about a failed actor named Bob. He’s definitely fictional and not based on anybody real. That’d be ruthless

https://soundcloud.com/user-804172376-210408674/bob-hell-never-go-far

 
     
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Rhys Fraser Joined Jan 30, 2018
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Feb 26, 2019, 07:41 PM

I like this, but I struggled to make out the lyrics. When I did, I thought they were really cool. I also think that there’s a strong melody lurking below the spoken-more-than-sung delivery. Can you find a way to let it out? :)

 
     
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Gavin Sinclair Joined Dec 02, 2014
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Feb 27, 2019, 01:22 PM

Haha, thanks Gavin. I’ll continue working on the enunciation/melodic quality of my vocals. If ya made out some of it without lyrics hopefully I’m moving in the right direction :P Cheers!

 
     
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