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Words of a lonely heart

 
       
 
Oct 09, 2005, 10:03 PM

I’m talkin’,
but who’s listenin’
I’m longin’,
but who’s givin’

Am i searchin’,
Am I dreamin’

Are these the words of a lonely heart?
Is this is how all lovers part?

I’m callin’,
but who’s hidin’
I’m cryin’,
but who’s laughin’?

Am i searchin’,
Am I dreamin’

Are these the words of a lonely heart?
Is this is how all lovers part?

Little lies of sweet armors,
Can I ask for more?
Sweet whispers of make-believes,
Can I keep them when you leave?

Dreams
made for those who dared,
Love
are never meant to be shared

Am i searchin’,
Am I dreamin’

Are these the words of a lonely heart?
Is this is how all lovers part?

 
     
Helen Chen Joined Oct 09, 2005
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Oct 09, 2005, 10:14 PM

Dreams
made for those who dared,
Love
are never meant to be shared

Sorry.. changein this line to:

Dreams
made for those who dared,
Love
that’s not to be shared,

 
     
Helen Chen Joined Oct 09, 2005
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Oct 10, 2005, 07:22 AM

This is a little different than some I’ve read on here, but it kinda works for me. I like it. What genere is this? Rock, Alternative? I really like the lines “Sweet whispers of make-believes,
Can I keep them when you leave” lol…..............

 
     
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Charles Kirkland Joined Feb 15, 2005
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Oct 10, 2005, 07:54 AM

Thanks Charles,

I have not quite finish this yet, I thought i just post it up to see if it’s worth any good to brush it up. I’ve wrote jiggles before but this is my first attempt with songs.

“Sweet whispers of make-believes,
Can I keep them when you leave”

This line actually came to mind, when a friend of mine gonna leave her boyfriend, and all these she has confessed to me that she’s been liein to him all through the affair, and most likely she’ll carry the truth with her after they part.

Kinda cruel but I thought it’s also kinda true..

I have thought of giving it a spunky rocker tune. but I actaully wrote this with Vocal in mind.

Thanks for the enrouragement, I’ll work on the rest..

 
     
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