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(Rely on someone else) Need some feed back pleas

 
       
 
Oct 10, 2005, 04:47 AM

This is one of my first song and it may need some work so help me out

Rely on someone else (Independent)

Verse1:
Come on and have some
Feed yourself
Come on and drink some
Drown yourself
why dont you slip down
to someone else
why dont you breakdown
break yourself

Chorus:
And you rely on someone else
so independent by yourself
So self sufficient to self sustain
wont ask for help wont ask for fame
And you rely on someone else
So indepentent nothing else

Verse2
Dont let your pride stop
Stop yourself
Dont let your heart drop
Drop yourself
Why cant you hear me
Hear yourself
Why wont you help me
help yourself

Chorus:
And you rely on someone else
so independent by yourself
So self sufficient to self sustain
wont ask for help wont ask for fame
And you rely on someone else
So indepentent nothing else

Bridge
And ask yourself am i happy
You see yourself its not clear
And ask yourself am i happy
You see yourself see your fear

Verse3:
So let me help you
help yourself
So let me give you
Something else
Dont let it stop you
feel the rain
dont let it stop you
feel the pain

Thats it tell me what you think

 
     
sam lincicome Joined Oct 08, 2005
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