:...:...:...He’s Comin’ Back Home :..:..:..:.....Lyrics By Shirley Elane /James [JD Stenzel]

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Mar 13, 2010, 09:08 PM

Hey shirley, I was asking about an audio.. didn’t Lee Andrew do a demo? :-)

 
     
Wallace Anderson Joined Dec 21, 2005
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Mar 21, 2010, 12:42 AM

Feb 21, 2010, 10:59 PM

He’s Comin’ Back Home

VERSE 1
John my brother—wait before you leave
There’s trouble brewing down at the creek
Hangman roped another thief
Now there’s a soul in need


VERSE 2

He robbed the bank on Monroe street

Had a wife and kids to feed

Tried to ride out on the twelve fifteen

They caught him before the bridge

PRECHORUS

Come on John-grab your bible again

CHORUS

Our Father who art in Heaven

This ain’t the life you wanted him livin’

Have mercy on a poor man’s soul

Hes goin’ back home

BRIDGE

No trial date no magistrate no reprieve

It was justice served down by the creek

CHORUS

Our Father who art in Heaven

This ain’t the life you wanted him livin’

Have mercy on a poor man’s soul

He’s comin’ back home

VERSE 3

Sheriff notified his next of kin

Waited on his wife and little kids

Heard momma tellin’ his daughters

Daddy made a bad mistake

LIFT

Yeah-daddy made a bad mistake

CHORUS

Our Father who art in Heaven

This ain’t the life you wanted him livin’

Have mercy on a poor man’s soul

He’s comin’ back home

OUTRO

Have mercy on a poor man’s soul

He’s comin’ back home

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Shirley Elane Matthews/JD Stenzel

 
     
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Shirley Elane Matthews Joined Feb 24, 2007
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Mar 21, 2010, 12:57 AM

@ James : Wally ‘‘says he hears a melody in his head….For This Piece…
I would like to explore what he has in mind….He asked Lee what
he was gonna do with this Piece…This is my first big ‘‘song of
this nature..lol….Whao.’‘what genre is this…Blue grass… country
I luv blue grass…okay,,,let me know what cha thoughts are….
I;m diggin this piece,,thanx,,For being a co write.. James…:)
you can telll Shari;;to stop praying .:). everything is gonna
be alright….you dig…;;;Shari I would love to hear your
input also..I can;t wait to hear your may 10th debut
;;o…’’ I heard about AJ ‘‘hope he has an speedy recovery..
don;t give up,,God moves in mysterious ways…:)

SEE you both in a few ;o
Shirl;o

 
     
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Shirley Elane Matthews Joined Feb 24, 2007
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Mar 21, 2010, 01:01 AM

@ Wally….

no Wally there is n;t an audio ,,
for this Piece…:)...

hmmmmmm. JAmes do you have Wally;s email Address??

See you in a few;o
Shirl;o

 
     
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Shirley Elane Matthews Joined Feb 24, 2007
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Mar 21, 2010, 09:46 AM

I like the southern rock-ish angle with resonator or steel guitar and a bluesy edge for this. I’m positive it can be a great addition to an artist’s CD one day. Can’t go wrong with a Hank JR style vocalist.

Thanks everybody for the comments as well-
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(Humble to the humble, inflexible to the arrogant)

 
     
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JD Stenzel Joined Apr 02, 2006
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Mar 21, 2010, 10:11 AM

JD & Shirl,

I’m still down with this if you want me to be….

-LeeAndrew

 
     
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Mar 21, 2010, 01:41 PM

Hell;o Lee..:)... it;s always good to hear from ya..

.hmmmmmmm.’‘I;m diggin that resonator or steel guitar
with a Bluesy Blue grass feel..;;I;m sure about it being
rockish,,,but I do like ;;the kick of The foot drum,,,
along with the resonator or steel guitar,,,:)I do luv
the Southern feel..


Lee I don;t know if you have access to these instruments,,,
but if my memory serves me right ;0;You will be in a better
position as far as Production,,In May..Lee I would be honored
if you could get a tight Production for this Piece,,,....
I will email Wally and let him know What;s going down…:)

Lee it;s always a joy talkin to ya..:)

My prays are with you.:)
I can;t wait for you to get back
home to the States,,,,,,
On America soil !!


Take care,,,;o
Shirl;o

 
     
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Shirley Elane Matthews Joined Feb 24, 2007
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Mar 21, 2010, 02:29 PM

This song really rocks Shirl and JD~~~
Very tight write.
Could very well be a hit !!!!
Shirley~~ I’ll never stop praying girl Lol…
And I’m sure AJ will be just fine…
He has soo many praying for him.
God bless you both,
Shari

~~~WRITE ON~~~
The Aquila Winds Are Blowing Strong !!!

 
     
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Shari Aquila Winds Joined Mar 12, 2010
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Mar 21, 2010, 02:31 PM

And we’ve seen what Lee can do ~~~
He kicks butt~~
Great song and with Lee’s help~~
How can it fail ?
Rock on,
Shari

~~~WRITE ON~~~
The Aquila Winds Are Blowing Strong !!!

 
     
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Shari Aquila Winds Joined Mar 12, 2010
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