BABY I LOVE YOU SO MUCH

You are so close to my heart and i love you .
and i need you.
Cos if you go , i will be so down
you are my strength ,you are my,my,life
i live up to life becos you are there for me
please baby don’t let it die,don’t let this go uu.oh oh.
don’t let my life go down
you are, you are my hope i love you don’t go uu.oh oh.

i love you baby ,i love you!
save my life baby save me
i love you so much
Don’t go uu.oh oh.

you can feel it right in my pulse
and my heart beats just for you
oh! baby don’t let me breakdown
this time ,i fear losing you
I dont want you baby to go away ,save me
save my life baby, i love you,i love u oh uu oh oh.

I mean it baby trust me
we’ve been together for long
never let you down
i don’t need anything baby but your love
just be there for me.i love you
you know its been you alone all the way
i can’t just start all over with anyone else
The silly things we say,we do
you know baby its special
i love you sooooo much.

copyright faustina A.2010.

Hey faustina A, I’ve read your last three posts and they are pretty
solid writes, all seem to be conversational, they have feeling if not
depth but are direct and are soulful, the only nit I would have is
lack of hook, a killer line that grabs attention, “I love you so much”
is nice and familiar but maybe a little too familiar,

Tony.

thanks tony,i will take that on board and make amendments.great.

just to say tony ,any ideas or cwould you like to collab with me on any of the songs.need to touch them up.PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE!.

faustina A - 25 February 2010 01:17 AM

You are close to my heart and i love you .
and i need you.
Cos if you go , i will be down
you are my strength ,you are my,my,life
i live up to life becos you are there for me
please baby don’t let it die,don’t let this go uu.oh oh.
don’t let my life go down
you are, you are my hope i love you don’t go uu.oh oh.

i love you baby ,i love you to bits
save my life baby save me
i love you to bits
Don’t go uu.oh oh.

you can feel it right in my pulse
and my heart beats just for you
oh! baby don’t let me breakdown
this time ,i fear losing you
I dont want you baby to go away ,save me
save my life baby, i love you,i love u oh uu oh oh.

I mean it baby trust me
we’ve been together for long
never let you down
i don’t need anything baby but your love
just be there for me.i love you
you know its been you alone all the way
i can’t just start all over with anyone else
The silly things we say,we do
you know baby its special
i love you to bits

copyright faustina A.2010.

tittle changed to i love you to bits.