*** WE HIDE THE LIES ***

Mar 02, 2010, 04:32 PM

A short simple tight and simple little lyric from me, I would hope that this be recorded with loads of instrumental! Please feel free to leave your thoughts.

We hide the lies

Instrumental intro

V1
Over the mountains
Under the deep blue sea’s
I will search for the truth
In you? and in me?

Chorus
All those secrets
We hide in clouds, the sky
In oceans ~ we hide the lies

V2
Through the forests
The deserts, hot and dry
I will search for answers
To show? me the way?
Chorus
All those secrets
We hide in clouds, the sky
In oceans ~ we hide the lies

Bridge
Just waiting for the truth in you
To show the truth in me
Till then I wonder in dreams
Over the mountains
Under the deep blue sea’s
Deep blue sea’s?.

Chorus x2
All those secrets
We hide in clouds, the sky
In oceans ~ we hide the lies

The lies
The lies

Instrumental to fad

Copyright : All Rights reserved UTC Philip Smith 2010

Mar 03, 2010, 08:55 AM

This is being composed’and you all can listen to it soon, i have heard parts already’ and simply it’s outstanding! I will post the link when it’s ready.

Take care all
Phil

Mar 03, 2010, 05:43 PM

Hi Philip,

It’s a interesting write, I think the music will do the lyric justice as it seems a little all over the place to read! I do like the style you have used its thought provoking and kinda out there not quite sure what your searching for and what the lie is!

Well done though, look forward to hearing it as a finished peice!

:@)

Mar 03, 2010, 06:31 PM

Thank you Sara,
All over the place! LOL, I don’t think i was searching for anything’ but to provoke thoughts!
which i believe it has. just been listening to the progress’ sounds good.

Take care
Phil

Mar 10, 2010, 09:22 AM

This will be edited and reposted very soon’ after the song has been launched !!
First cut sounds great :)

take care all
Phil

Mar 10, 2010, 10:14 AM

“wonder” or “wander” (the difference won’t be audible, I’m just wondering)

Good write! I look forward to the recording.

Mar 10, 2010, 11:56 AM

Hi Bernd,
You spotted that little mistake’ shooosh!
It should be “wander”, as you said, it won’t make mush difference.
The edit with Mp3 link should be here soon.

Take care
Phil

Mar 10, 2010, 02:42 PM

Well’ here is the final Edit, hope you all like this!
please just follow the link and enjoy, please leave me your thoughts.
LISTEN HERE… http://www.talentscorner.net/audio/91/we-hide-the-lies

We hide the lies

V1
Over the mountains
Under the deep blue sea’s
I will search for the truth
In you, and in me…

Yes I will
Yes I will….

Chorus x2
All those secrets
We hide in the clouds, the sky
In the oceans ~ we hide the lies

We hide the lies

V2
Through the forests
The deserts, hot and dry
I will search for answers
To show, me the way

Yes I will
Yes I will

Chorus x2
All those secrets
We hid in the clouds, the sky
In the oceans ~ we hide the lies

Bridge
Just waiting for the truth in you
To show the truth in me
Tell then I wander in dreams
Over the mountains
Under the deep blue sea’s
Deep blue sea’s…

Guitar solo

Chorus x2
All those secrets
We hid in the clouds, the sky
In the oceans ~ we hide the lies

Secrets
We hide the lies

Secrets
We hide the lies

To fade

Copyright All Right Reserved UTC Mr Philip Smith 2010

Mar 12, 2010, 06:47 AM

Whoa.. What A Beautiful Piece ...the Production is heavenly
Phil your Lyric is’‘like a firestorm..when it spreads it will
light you up…:)..i;m diggin this dude….The singer for
this Piece Tommy is pure talent..;o
I get it Phil ’ This piece’ it;s reflective enough’
to challenge one to think ,,very entertaining
I luv the ‘‘Intro!!

:)

See You in a few;o
Shirl;o

Mar 12, 2010, 07:59 AM

Thanks shirl,
makes me happy that you like it, please feel free to spread the word’lol
I will pass your thoughts to Tommy.

Take care
Phil

Mar 12, 2010, 01:49 PM

Interesting and dynamic intro, great vibe and use of delay. Excellent lift into chorus, and layering in the chorus. I love the melody and vocal contrasting! Your piece is really cool, and holds the interest. The keyboarding is subtle and brilliant, the lead is a great lift. What HAVEN’T you done right in this? Nothing left undone; nothing over-done. Perfect. The vocals are fabulous. Kudus to the nines.

JD

Mar 12, 2010, 01:59 PM

Hi JD,
Thank you for your kind remarks, i am so pleased that you like this piece.
I will pass your remarks to Tommy’ i’m sure he will be over the moon.

Take care my friend
Phil

Mar 12, 2010, 04:32 PM

Nice~~~
Good work I say.
God Bless,
Shari

Mar 12, 2010, 10:45 PM

Great vocals, a song so simple, I can hear it as a #1 song. Good job !!!!!!!!!!!:-)

Mar 13, 2010, 03:18 AM

Hi Elaine,
Makes me happy that you like it, number one you say’ wouldn’t that be great!
I will pass your thought on to Tommy.

Take care
Phil