You and I

Mar 22, 2010, 06:29 AM

You and I

copyright 2010 simone ewart

I could hold another’s hand
I could look into another’s eyes
But it would never be the same
For it would not be you and I

I could whisper into another’s ear
Grow old with them through the years
Be their lover, be their friend
But from beginning to end
Upon my heart is written your name
The truth would show in my eyes
It wouldn’t be the same
For it would not be you and I

All the time we spent together
Crying as friends; laughing as lovers
Have you forgotten all we went through?
Am I even a memory to you?

Touch me, Remember me,
Is it not my hand you miss?
True love’s embrace and kiss?
How can your heart not want to be with me?
How can your soul want to be set free?
What we have - will only ever be us
How can this love not be enough?

I could hold another’s hand
I could look into another’s eyes
But it would never be the same
For it would not be you and I

What we have- is all who we are
Together we are the light,
shining in the darkest night
from the brightest star

How can you not see?
How can you not feel?
We are meant to be
Our love is for real

I could be another’s lover,be their friend
But from beginning to end
Upon my heart is written your name
The truth would show in my eyes
It wouldn’t be the same
For it would not be you and I

Mar 22, 2010, 02:43 PM

hi,simone,i think you got a great write here,but it needs a better arrangement .as in the verses…....I dont know maybe some one more experienced can help here.
Good luck tho.

Mar 22, 2010, 04:55 PM

Thank you Faustina- I agree - theme is good- verses are weak.  I actually wrote this song in Spanish then tried to convert to English- think something got lost in the translation…lol. Will keep working on it.:)

Mar 22, 2010, 05:04 PM

I love this song Simone and your pretty picture .
God Bless,
Shari