I need a English Version of my song which is written in Farsi

Hi There

I need an English Version “Lyrics”  for my song which is written in Farsi called “Gole Man” Meaning ” My Ros”
any how it doesn’t have to match the lyrics , as long as it flows and goes with the melody.

here is the links to my song:

http://www.reverbnation.com/rastin

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpsUYkkIweQ

When you don’t even bother to give feedback to people who try, you won’t get much response. There are not too many lyricists willing to write matching existing tunes. Remember “Simorgh” or rather “Phoenix”?
See details on http://www.justplainfolks.org/forum/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=793613 (or in your mail)

Well, I’d re-written it so I can create a folk tune for it myself later this year.

Bernd

Sorry For that bern, but this is the first priority for me right now. I need a very strong hook for this song to make it a “Hit Song”

thanks

Rastin.
http://www.rastinmusic.com

I wish you luck, then!

All the best,
Bernd

Hi,
ahm… the song is in Farsi. So… are you from Afghanistan or Tadschik? Because I know many people from Afghanistan :)........ I checked your video, the girl is really nice. You have a good song here!

Can you supply a note-by-note pronunciation of the song as you sing it?

With that a listener can easily get the melody, which seems very good overall, if a bit long.

The video is very good. I’ll have to watch again to see if it has a happy ending.

And - just to post again - (I watched the video several times, it´s really good).

I could ask my friend to translate the song for me. Then we know what it exactly means, and with this Bernd could easily write a good, suitable lyrics, can´t you? :)

@Martin

I could but I won’t. I did “Simorgh” = “Phoenix” for Rastin which I actually like very much, but never got any feedback. The version that matches Farid Zoland’s music was of no use in any other musical context, so I had to re-write the lot. No, I won’t collaborate with Rastin again.

Cheers,
Bernd