Bled out (something new)

 
       
 
Sep 04, 2010, 05:51 PM

something new my band has been working on i think we have some video on you tube if you look up Bradley Jacks there is a live performance. sound is not that great but it will give you an idea of how the song goes  


1st verse
I bled myself out impassively
my flaws underneath show not a thing
no lacerations to observe upon me
deeper than bones and vessels interweaved
procaliming complexions aren’t depths unmatched
theres a broken surface but no scratch

chorus
Have you really heard it all before
the images i fear leave no remorse
a stone so oblivious there is no thought
your walking and decaying with your blinders on
desenitized from the inside out
dead at the center with no way out

2nd verse
this interior holds a harrowing tale
a map to show how to leave a soul bare
destroy something beautiful without care
wage war with emotions that are not there
this big black X marks the spot
where my heart should be but it turned to dust

3rd verse
the way you affected my fragile thought
locked away simplicity with a single stroke
sinful smile outlines your features
you threw away the crucial creature
the way you affected my fragile thought
locked away simplicity with a single stroke

copyright 9-4-2010 micropoizen productions all rights reserved

[ Edited: 07 September 2010 05:56 AM by joe crosser]
 
     
joe crosser Joined Dec 03, 2005
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Sep 07, 2010, 05:38 PM

Hi Joe,

This is a very thoughtful, descriptive and psychological lyric. I really enjoyed reading through it, very nice work.

Tony

 
     
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Sep 07, 2010, 10:11 PM

Well thank you very much I really appreaciate it.  Good observation by the way looks like there is some intelligence out there.

 
     
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