won’t give in

 
       
 
Sep 10, 2010, 09:48 AM

I’m not yet sure as to the title. A song for the poor creatures that have to work to earn their living - like me. For about every second rhyme I used http://www.rhymezone.com/ (peer, crook, averse, deplete, kin). Otherwise a quick job. I think the chorus can be repeated once more at the end. I have a quite catchy tune in mind for it - that I’ll probably have forgotten by the time I think of producing the song.


VERSE
my hardship ends at closing time
I’ve no intent to social climb
I just enjoy my evening beer
when I’m joining with my peers

VERSE
I saw your patronizing look
like I was some kind of crook
while you’re master of the universe
you see, I’m just a little boss-averse

PRECHORUS
you may think you can dictate to me
you may think you can lay down the law
you base your views on ideology
but your theories have got a flaw

CHORUS
I’m not your slave
I’m not your kin
I’ve got my pride
I won’t give in

VERSE
you pay the wage you’re in the driver’s seat
I’m just some source that you deplete
but that’s restricted to the working hours
at quitting time you simply lose your power

PRECHORUS
you may think you can dictate to me
you may think you can lay down the law
you base your views on ideology
but your theories have got a flaw

CHORUS
I’m not your slave
I’m not your kin
I’ve got my pride
I won’t give in

 
     
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Bernd Harmsen Joined May 31, 2009
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