Re-post: Love, Is That You?

 
       
 
May 01, 2012, 09:02 PM

Verse 1:
I’ve been looking for love
And I think I found it
Cause I met a girl
And we had our moment
And she makes me feel things
That I’ve never felt
But I’ve got a question
I just gotta ask

Chorus:
Love, is that you
Between us two
And are these feelings
I’m feeling true
I just wanna know
Cause I ain’t got a clue
Love, is that you?

Verse 2:
They say you will know
When you find it
But it’s so hard
When your heart is broken
But this girl is different
Cause when I’m around her
Not only is it heaven
My stick wakes up

{Chorus}

Bridge:
She said she loved me
And I said the same thing
And I’ve been thinking
‘Bout buying a ring
But before I do
I just gotta ask you

{Chorus}

She said I do, and I did too
And I’m so glad I found you

Love, that is you
Between us two
And these feelings
I’m feeling are true
And now I know
And she did too
Love that is you

 
     
Pius N Mburu Joined Apr 18, 2008
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May 01, 2012, 10:04 PM

Pius;

My stick wakes up???
Not so sure that’s a line for a love song

It’s funny but maybe for something different.

I have one called Mournin would posted. Check it out.

Bill

 
     
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Bill Kahney Joined May 27, 2009
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May 01, 2012, 11:31 PM

I wanted it to be both love or lust kinda way and that line just says what sounded good to me.

 
     
Pius N Mburu Joined Apr 18, 2008
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May 02, 2012, 12:37 AM

Hi Pius,,Nice story,,,BUt you have to many AND’s

I’ve been looking for love
And I think I found it
Cause I met a girl
And we had our moment

she makes me feel things
That I’ve never felt
But I’ve got a question
I just gotta ask


Chorus:
Love, is that you
Between us two
Are these feelings
I’m feeling true
I just wanna know
Cause I ain’t got a clue
Love, is that you?

 
     
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darlene mccoy Joined Jul 14, 2007
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May 02, 2012, 01:05 AM

thank you, \I’ll try to take some out.

 
     
Pius N Mburu Joined Apr 18, 2008
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May 02, 2012, 05:29 AM

Pius, I think you might want to re word the that one line, there are other choices I think would work a little better.
Like maybe
Not only is it heaven
This feeling inside me wakes up
Something like that other wise not bad.
God Bless
Elaine

 
     
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Elaine Brewer Joined Jun 06, 2009
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May 02, 2012, 05:36 PM

thank you all. Can’t think of other way to re-word the line, and I don’t wanna be redundant on (feelings). I want it to be a lust kinda thing.

 
     
Pius N Mburu Joined Apr 18, 2008
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May 03, 2012, 05:48 PM

this might do it; Not only is it heaven, It’s just her and me

 
     
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