“One of those days”

 
       
 
Oct 21, 2016, 10:52 AM

Hey, so wrote this song a while ago and I think its decent but definitely not a pro writer or singer so would love some feedback on it, negative or positive.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-xePGO6MW_A

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Sean Sully Joined Oct 21, 2016
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Oct 21, 2016, 03:11 PM

It seems pretty good to me and you have a good voice. Do you play an instrument or know somebody who does?

 
     
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Oct 23, 2016, 11:23 AM

@Gavin thanks man :) Unfortunately I dont :(
@Pig, Awesome, thanks!

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Oct 23, 2016, 12:49 PM

if that feels right to you we can work on it. how are you set up for recording….. besides camera phone? :)

 
     
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Oct 29, 2016, 11:35 AM

Would Love to, unfortunately limited to the camera phone right now though :p

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Oct 29, 2016, 12:23 PM

eye’m curious….... what were you listening to when you sang that?

 
     
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Nov 01, 2016, 11:27 AM

IDK, Listen to a bit of everything, drawn to more bluesy stuff usually though, so prob Etta, Ella or BB, but could just have easily been some Britney lol

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