This is a new track I am working on. I feel like it came out pretty well I’m just worried about the mix a little. I think the bass needs to come up and possibly the vocals a little. Every time I listen to it the mix sounds different so I can’t tell what needs to be worked out.
By Torchlight - Hurricane
Hey Thom, I think you’re right. You need to bring your voice a bit forward in the mix. You’re drowned out by the guitar. Probably right about the bass too. That would probably give it a more satisfying depth.
Cool voice - fits the music well. Not that I understood a single word - well right now I’m making out “don’t worry ‘bout me - ? I’ll be alright”...
Turn the guitar track low, and start from there. It’s punk alright, but its harshness and volume kill everything else.
good lyricist, mediocre songwriter, lousy musician;
likes rock, writes for anybody anyway