” YOU’RE ALL I SEE ”

 
       
 
Mar 18, 2017, 01:15 PM

(V1)

I’ve been waiting
All my life
For someone like you
Who makes me feel
The way i do


CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You’re my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true

(V2)

I will never forget
When we met
We were so naive
But we believed
That this is real

CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You’re my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true

(V3)

You’re my first
And my last
I was yours
Didn’t have to ask
I just knew

BRIDGE

Here we stand
Surrounded by
The few who
Gave there blessing
As we say i do

CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You’re my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true

Words: Paul Brookes 2017.Copyrighted @ The Guild Of International Songwriters And Composers 2107880.

[ Edited: 20 March 2017 06:22 AM by paul brookes]
 
     
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Mar 19, 2017, 08:27 PM

Hey Paul.  This is such a sweet song. Love the subject. Do you have a melody for these lyrics? As I read them I sang them. It came out slightly different for me (just that last line of each verse and the last line of the chorus)...


I’ve been waiting
All my life
For someone like you
Who makes me feel
The way i do

CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You are my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true


(V2)

I will never forget
When we met
We were so naive
But we believed
That this is real

CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You are my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true

(V3)

You’re my first
And my last
I was yours,
Didn’t have to ask
I just knew

BRIDGE

Here we stand
Surrounded by
The few who
Gave their blessing
As we say i do

CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You’re my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true

https://soundcloud.com/jennystokes-nz

“Life is no ‘brief candle….” It is a sort of splendid torch which I have got hold of for the moment…I want to make it burn as brightly as possible before handing it on…”

- George Bernard Shaw

 
     
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Mar 20, 2017, 06:27 AM
Jenny Stokes - 19 March 2017 08:27 PM

Hey Paul.  This is such a sweet song. Love the subject. Do you have a melody for these lyrics? As I read them I sang them. It came out slightly different for me (just that last line of each verse and the last line of the chorus)...


I’ve been waiting
All my life
For someone like you
Who makes me feel
The way i do

CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You are my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true

HI Jenny.

Thanks for your kind words.I only write don’t play or sing,so i’m always looking to collaborate.I had a female in mind for the vocals when i wrote this.So would love to hear your take on this.I also like your suggestions and changed the wording accordingly, gives the lyric a better flow

Regards
Paul.


(V2)

I will never forget
When we met
We were so naive
But we believed
That this is real

CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You are my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true

(V3)

You’re my first
And my last
I was yours,
Didn’t have to ask
I just knew

BRIDGE

Here we stand
Surrounded by
The few who
Gave their blessing
As we say i do

CHORUS

You’re all i see
You’re all i need
You’re my life
The air i breathe
Our love is true

 
     
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Mar 20, 2017, 02:09 PM
paul brookes - 20 March 2017 06:27 AM

Thanks for your kind words.I only write don’t play or sing,so i’m always looking to collaborate.I had a female in mind for the vocals when i wrote this.So would love to hear your take on this.I also like your suggestions and changed the wording accordingly, gives the lyric a better flow

Thanks for the offer, Paul. If you’re willing to wait a few months, I’d be happy to help. I’ve got a weird throat thing goin on at the moment so I’m not able to sing. Once I’m back at the mic, there are quite a few ahead in the queue, but if you’re willing to wait…let me know and I’ll see what I can do for ya.
Jen

https://soundcloud.com/jennystokes-nz

“Life is no ‘brief candle….” It is a sort of splendid torch which I have got hold of for the moment…I want to make it burn as brightly as possible before handing it on…”

- George Bernard Shaw

 
     
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Mar 20, 2017, 03:27 PM
Jenny Stokes - 20 March 2017 02:09 PM
paul brookes - 20 March 2017 06:27 AM

Thanks for your kind words.I only write don’t play or sing,so i’m always looking to collaborate.I had a female in mind for the vocals when i wrote this.So would love to hear your take on this.I also like your suggestions and changed the wording accordingly, gives the lyric a better flow

Thanks for the offer, Paul. If you’re willing to wait a few months, I’d be happy to help. I’ve got a weird throat thing goin on at the moment so I’m not able to sing. Once I’m back at the mic, there are quite a few ahead in the queue, but if you’re willing to wait…let me know and I’ll see what I can do for ya.


Hi jenny

It’s a deal sorry to hear of your throat problems.when you feel strong enough and confident to do our song justice is good enough for me.All I ask in return is you credit me with the lyrics.

Regards
Paul.

 
     
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Mar 20, 2017, 03:54 PM

Of course, Paul. Wouldn’t dream of doing it any other way. I’ll let you know when I’m ready to start. It’ll be end of June or early July. Okay with you?

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- George Bernard Shaw

 
     
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Mar 21, 2017, 03:46 AM
Jenny Stokes - 20 March 2017 03:54 PM

Of course, Paul. Wouldn’t dream of doing it any other way. I’ll let you know when I’m ready to start. It’ll be end of June or early July. Okay with you?

Hi jenny

Thanks again end of June early July is OK with me.

Regards
Paul.

 
     
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