TURN BACK TIME

 
       
 
Mar 31, 2017, 10:50 PM

Hello All, this song was inspired by a line in one of Ray Bertrams songs posted here in the lyrics library recently, thank you Ray.  Please note this is still a work in progress, probably need a little work on the bridge, lol, still pondering it.

TURN BACK TIME Lyrics and Music by Ron Nelson 2017

V1
I must have hurt you,
what have I done.
Can’t believe-I’ve become,
the lonely one.
How can I fix this,
what can I do.
I’m on the outside-watchin him,
lovin you.

Chr
If I could turn-back time,
If I could hit-rewind.
Tell me -what could I do,
to make it up to you,
if I could turn back time.

V2
And when I see you,
holding on to him.
I feel those teardrops-start to fall,
I try to rein them in.
It’s then I realize,
I ain’t gonna win.
Start to feel like-I’ll never ever,
love again.

repeat Chr.

Bridge
Try to find a way,
to make this right.
When I find a way,
to turn back time.

Instrumental

repeat chorus

[ Edited: 18 April 2017 02:10 PM by Ron Nelson]

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Apr 18, 2017, 02:12 PM

I finally decided on the bridge, edited the original post, and will soon be recording.

Best wishes,

Ron

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Apr 20, 2017, 08:02 AM

In a bridge, the use of the title is not recommended.

 
     
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Apr 20, 2017, 09:10 AM

Hello Guy,

Good to see you.  Thank you for the guidance, it is much appreciated.  Best wishes,

Speak soon,

Ron

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Apr 21, 2017, 03:59 AM

Hi Ron,
Your original bridge was better ..JUST needs a small modification… something like this

Your Bridge:

Never gonna mend,
this hole left in my heart.
How’m I supposed to get,
your tattoo off my arm.

re-write:

Never gonna mend,
this hole left in my heart.
How’m I supposed to send,
your love out of my heart

or:
your (vision /photo/ picture/ figure) out of my heart

Speak soon,
Nelly

 
     
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Apr 21, 2017, 01:19 PM

Hello Nelly,

Good to see you again.  Thank You for your suggestions, they might work.  I will try them out and see if the fit the melody, best wishes,

Speak soon,

Ron

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Apr 21, 2017, 05:16 PM

Either way I like it Ron.

 
     
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Apr 23, 2017, 08:38 AM

Hello Carroll,

Good to hear from you, and Thank You.  Once I get the bridge right and the music down the way I like it, I will forward you a copy via email for your feedback.  Best wishes,

Speak soon,

Ron

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