I have a song called “Killer” and would love some feedback. It’s a fun little ditty!
Thanks so much!
I’m getting kind of wasted looking at you
Won’t you take me up to your hotel room
We can have some fun not knowing me and you
So let’s give it a run give me 4, 3, 2…
(one, one, one)
Now we can keep it classy if you really want to
Or we can f*ck around if you’re feeling in the mood
baby sit down in this chair and let me blindfold you
Now don’t you peak
I’m a freak like you
Didn’t your mama tell you not to trust strangers?
Especially strange men who are looking at you
With a drink in their hand
This was a bad idea but it could have been worse
I’m not gonna hurt you—But I’m taking your purse
Cuz I’m not a killer
I’m just a bad bad boy
So I gotta do what I gotta do
But I’m not a killer
I just take what I need to take
And I make sure to mind my P’s and Q’s
I apologize and thank you
I’m not a killer
You’re smoking a cigar walking in NoBu Malibu
I’m looking at your car dipped in that baby blue
You know that color would go perfect with my Golden Goose shoes
I’m making me a plan gimme 4,3,2
(give me one, give me one)
I approach with a smile “Hello sir, how are you?”
“Leave the keys in the car i’ll park it safely for you”
I sense a hesitation for a second or two
But he gives me a nod and I tell him “Thank you”
Now didn’t your daddy tell you always trust your gut?
Listen to your belly cuz it knows what’s what
It’s super f*cking telling
It said “bad idea”, did you listen? No.
But it’s ok…you can Uber home.