Don’t let it go

 
       
 
May 19, 2017, 02:26 PM

Don’t let it go
Verse
You’re a father you’re a husband.
You’re the man they love
But your glass is half empty.
Somehow it’s not enough.
If adventures what you’re after
Is it greener grass?
I know that they look beautiful
But rainbows don’t last.
Chorus
You don’t know what you’ve got
Until it’s gone.
So hold on, hold on tight.
Don’t let it go.
Verse
You’re a brother you’re a good friend.
You’re mom’s youngest song.
Don’t give up the life you’ve got
The night is still young.
If adventures what you’re after
Take a closer look.
There are chapters yet to be read.
There’s much more to the book.
Chorus
You don’t know what you’ve got
Until it’s gone.
So hold on, hold on tight.
Don’t let it go.
Bridge
Sometimes the garden’s late to bloom
So don’t chase butterflies.
It might be what you’re looking for
Is right before your eyes.
Verse
You’re a father you’re a husband.
You’re the man they love
But your glass is half empty.
Somehow it’s not enough.
If adventures what you’re after
Is it greener grass?
I know that they look beautiful
But rainbows don’t last.
Chorus
You don’t know what you’ve got
Until it’s gone.
So hold on, hold on tight.
Don’t let it go.

 
     
carroll kiphen Joined Feb 22, 2016
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May 19, 2017, 06:04 PM

I think you have the beginning of some good lyrics here, maybe just a little fine tuning. Just some thoughts.

You’re a father you’re a husband.
You’re the man they love
But your glass seems half empty.
Somehow their love is not enough
If adventure is what you’re after
Is it greener grass?
Rainbows may be beautiful
But rainbows never last.

You don’t know what you’ve got
Until it’s gone.
You better grab them, hold on tight
You may wind up alone

You’re a brother you’re a good friend.
You’re mom’s youngest song.
Don’t give up the life you’ve got
The night is still too young.
If adventure what you’re looking for
Take a closer look.
There are chapters yet to be written.
In your book.

Sometimes the garden’s late to bloom
So don’t be chasing butterflies.
It might be what you’re looking for
Is right in front of your eyes.

 
     
Charles E Wood Joined Jan 05, 2009
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