shot of jack

 
       
 
Sep 01, 2017, 03:37 PM

like i said, a person wanted some of what i thought was my best songs…


someday the future’s gonna be the past
the days you look back at and laugh
so don’t drown yourself in sorrow
worrying about tomorrow

just kick off your shoes
sit back and relax
wash away the blues
have a shot of jack

does it really matter what someone has
when nothing they have ‘s’ gonna last
and don’t tell me you didn’t know
you can’t take it when you go

just kick off your shoes
sit back and relax
wash away the blues
have a shot of jack

you’re always doing things making you sad
but you’ll change that if you can
instead of going with the flow
you say you’ll be staying home

i know it doesn’t happen over night
don’t go thinking that it might
not here to say i told you so
but i want you out of that hole

just kick off your shoes
sit back and relax
wash away the blues
have a shot of jack

just kick off your shoes
sit back and relax
wash away the blues
have a shot of jack

 
     
dennis dawe Joined Apr 17, 2010
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Sep 01, 2017, 03:40 PM

It’s easier to say than to do… Okay, just joking, it’s really good for a motivational one :D

 
     
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Judie Sky Joined Sep 01, 2017
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Sep 01, 2017, 06:27 PM

Very well written.
Perfect structure.

Just by reading, I get a melody in my mind.

Very good!

 
     
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Guy E. Trépanier Joined Dec 05, 2005
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Sep 19, 2017, 07:13 AM

Well at least you have tried to get the right syllables in
each corresponding line of your verses

Mark your groupings VERSE CHORUS BRIDGE Et cetera at this time
its not evident

Hi All  

I am A Song Writer Performer based in Europe .I also work for a Publisher

and have spent years at E M I of Hayes U K working in A and R plus Artiste

Development.

 
     
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Brad De Younge Joined Aug 19, 2012
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