The Night Belongs To Me - Jenny Stokes

 
       
 
Sep 03, 2017, 02:39 PM

Hello folks

I’ve not been on here for a good while and wouldn’t have ventured to post anything but for the fact that your very own Jenny Stokes is the star of this one.

The Night Belongs To Me

It’s five o’clock
And you’re not there
To greet the sunrise with me

You want your time
And I’m prepared
To give a little
We can compromise

You’ll have your day
But you’ll have to pay
I’ll take the night

CHORUS
You can have the morning, the rooster’s crow
You can have the afternoon, nice and slow
You can have the evening’s rosy glow
But the night belongs to me

It’s up to you
If you won’t share
Your secrets with me

I won’t complain
That it’s unfair
To keep a little
something to yourself

You’ll have your day etc

CHORUS

When the day is over
And love is in the air
The cats come out to play
That’s the time I’ll show you
Why you’ll always be there
Why you can’t stay away

Chorus

https://soundcloud.com/cramer1930/the-night-belongs-to-me-demo/s-UBFvG

Any and all feedback will be appreciated. Thanks!

 
     
Ian Osborne Joined Jun 17, 2016
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Sep 07, 2017, 09:09 AM

Wow. Sultry. Nicely done!

 
     
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John Evans Joined Oct 01, 2016
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Sep 11, 2017, 06:40 AM

Pretty nice song, i like it.
It’s same to Frank Sinatra style.
There are certain tridentities with the motif in the chorus.
I would have made a simpler architectonics here.
I think abt binary form or for two simply periods (i mean chorus only).
Some solo is needed too.
So, it’s only my thoughts, overall song sounds good.
Have fun!

 
     
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Serg Joined Aug 30, 2017
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Sep 16, 2017, 12:25 PM

Personally, I had no problem with the tridentities with the motif. The architectonics, on the other hand…

JK. Nice song, as usual!

 
     
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Gavin Sinclair Joined Dec 02, 2014
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