THE SCENE OF THE CRIME

 
       
 
Sep 19, 2017, 07:40 PM

Hello all,

Would appreciate any comments or suggestions on these lyrics.  I have music for them and John Evans has sent an awesome instrumental track for me to work with, just want to make sure they are worthy.

THE SCENE OF THE CRIME

Verse 1
No I don’t claim to be innocent,
hell I’m as guilty as can be.
Excuse me judge sir if you please,
just throw the book at me.

Pre Chorus
Ill pay the bail, I’ll cop a plea, I’ll gladly do the time.
Just sentence me to life in her arms,
back at the scene of the time.

Chorus
The scene of the crime, the scene of the crime.
Her smile, those eyes, her lips on mine,
but I said goodbye.
Her smile, those eyes, her lips on mine,
lord I made her cry.
At the scene of the crime, the scene of the crime.

Verse 2
It was a case of entrapment,
right from the very start.
I preyed upon her emotions,
just to steal her heart.

Pre Chorus
I’ll pay the bail, I’ll cop a plea, I’ll gladly do the time.
Just sentence me to life in her arms,
back at the scene of the crime.

Chorus
The scene of the crime, the scene of the crime.
Her smile, those eyes, her lips on mine,
but I said goodbye.
Her smile, those eyes, her lips on mine,
lord I made her cry.
At the scene of the crime, the scene of the crime.

Bridge
You can put me under oath,
I swear to tell the truth.
It ought to be against the law,
to want that woman like I do, like I do.
Like I do.
You know it’s true.

Pre Chorus
I’ll pay the bail, I’ll cop a plea, I’ll gladly do the time.
Just sentence me to life in her arms,
back at the scene of the crime.

Chorus
The scene of the crime, the scene of the crime.
Her smile, those eyes, her lips on mine,
but I said goodbye.
Her smile, those eyes, her lips on mine,
lord I made her cry.
At the scene of the crime, the scene of the crime.


Best wishes to all.

[ Edited: 20 September 2017 11:44 AM by Deacon]

Music is an international language, say it with a song.

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Jan 12, 2018, 08:51 PM

Hello All,

Still a work in progress, I’m posting a link for any that want to listen.  https://soundcloud.com/user-295053414/scene-of-the-crimewma

Best wishes,

Speak soon

[ Edited: 12 January 2018 09:08 PM by Deacon]

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