J’aimerais bien

 
       
 
Oct 23, 2017, 12:43 PM

Hi everybody. This song with lyrics in French talks about my desire to paint a mirror over the village when the night is sad and she does not dress or wear makeup .. to reflect the moon and all the stars…. (A small approx. translation to the English)

It is a slow ballad on a relaxing music. I love it because the lyrics are beautiful and very descriptive and the melody was born of my feelings of that night…

I think that maybe a new rhythm, but also soft, in the middle part could be useful to highlight its importance? but I also like it like this, with its relaxing way.

I enjoy a lot making my own videos… You can watch it here


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9M8aTgXwYc

J’aimerais bien


J’aimerais bien
peindre un miroir
sur mon village,
quand la nuit est triste
et elle ne s’habille ni se maquille,
pour qu’ il reflète
toujours la lune,
et les étoiles,

et que les rêves trouvent un chemin
pour être fleurs
et magiciens,


dans ce grand vide qui s’ en fout bien
de toutes les heures
et les secondes
qui font la montre qui nous attache à notre temps.

(dans ce grand vide qui s’ en fout bien
de toutes les heures
et les secondes
qui font la montre qui nous attache à notre temps,
à notre temps, à notre temps…)


J’aimerais bien
peindre un miroir
sur mon village,
quand la chaleur
devient tyran
et brûle les champs,
pour qu’ il reflète
tous les nuages qui se promènent
du bras des vents
et que la pluie verse ses cruches
de temps en temps,
de temps en temps.


It would be great to know your opinion. See you!!! Mora

I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
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Oct 23, 2017, 02:26 PM

Lovely, Mara. You present a beautiful picture which the melody complements well. Really nice guitar! Love the video too.

One minor point - you pronounce the “s” on the end of “tous” in the line “tous les nuages qui se promènent.” It doesn’t detract from the lovely song, but I noticed it, so I thought I’d just point it out.

I look forward to hearing a lot more from you.

 
     
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Oct 23, 2017, 04:34 PM

Great sound! Wish I spoke French lol :)

 
     
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Oct 23, 2017, 05:00 PM

Here you go, Tony. A quick unpolished translation.

I’d like to paint
A mirror over my village
On nights that are sad
When it lies naked, no make-up
So that it might always
Reflect the moon
And the stars

And so that dreams
Find a path
To being flowers
And magicians

In this great emptiness
That cares not at all
For all the hours
And the seconds
That build the watch that fixes us to our time

I’d like to paint
A mirror
Over my village
When the heat
Becomes a tyrant
And scorches the fields
So that it might reflect
All the clouds which meander
From the arm of the wind
And that the rain might pour out her pitchers
From time to time
From time to time

 
     
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Oct 23, 2017, 05:18 PM

Thanks Gav!! :) Really nice Mora! :) Who does your recording ?

 
     
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Oct 23, 2017, 06:07 PM
Gavin Sinclair - 23 October 2017 02:26 PM

Lovely, Mara. You present a beautiful picture which the melody complements well. Really nice guitar! Love the video too.

One minor point - you pronounce the “s” on the end of “tous” in the line “tous les nuages qui se promènent.” It doesn’t detract from the lovely song, but I noticed it, so I thought I’d just point it out.

I look forward to hearing a lot more from you.

Thank you, Gavin. Yes, you are right, it’s a vice I did not know I have! Ça faisait longtemps que je ne chantais pas en français… Il y a des choses qui s’oublient…. Mon Dieu!

See you soon. Mora

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Oct 23, 2017, 07:41 PM
JAPOV - 23 October 2017 04:34 PM

Great sound! Wish I spoke French lol :)

Thank you! Mora

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Oct 23, 2017, 07:50 PM
JAPOV - 23 October 2017 05:18 PM

Thanks Gav!! :) Really nice Mora! :) Who does your recording ?

Gav has been very kind making his approx. translation but here goes my approx one.

I’d like to paint
A mirror over my village
On nights that are sad
and want to be naked
and without make-up
So that it might always
Reflect the moon
And the stars

And so the dreams
Find a path to become flowers
And magicians

In this great emptiness
that does not worry about the hours
And the seconds
That build the watch
that fixes us to our time

I’d like to paint
A mirror
Over my village
When the heat
Becomes a tyrant
And scorches the fields
So that it might reflect
All the clouds which meander
From the arm of the wind
And that the rain might pour out her pitchers
From time to time
From time to time.”

The recording?  I have my own studio for a long time ago

Thank you for your interest and see you.
Mora

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Oct 23, 2017, 10:14 PM

I just checked your Bio :) Very impressive Mora!! Welcome to the 101

 
     
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Oct 24, 2017, 07:25 PM
JAPOV - 23 October 2017 10:14 PM

I just checked your Bio :) Very impressive Mora!! Welcome to the 101

Your soundclick looks great, Tony!!! Thank you.

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