Prisoner of all fears

 
       
 
Nov 03, 2017, 09:08 AM

There are moments in Life very hard that can make you feel as if you lose your shadow, something that at first look seems not important but that makes you be real under our sun and the light. 

I made it on an acoustic guitar background with a soft percussion and the lead guitar when it appears seems to melt gently so as not to disturb the set. Marcus Nalgaber knows about my sensibility and how to highlight my words and my melody with his guitar.

My English accent is “different” that’s why I let you the lyrics below the vid to help you to follow the song.

I hope you will enjoy it. Thanks for watching.
Mora

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rzxjbOlE670


One day y lost my shadow while I walked through the Life
and I became a grain of cloud
among a neverending storm
among a neverending storm

shadow, shadow
that makes me true

I wanted to watch my inside
and I found me so naked
that I felt I was a convict
prisoner of all fears.

shadow, shadow
that makes me true

Be well.

I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
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Nov 03, 2017, 05:30 PM

Hi Mara.

There are a few problems with your English. I’ve suggested some changes below. Others might have better suggestions.

One day I lost my shadow while I walked through life
and I became a droplet of a cloud
caught in a never-ending storm
caught in a never-ending storm

shadow, shadow
that makes me true

I wanted to see my insides (or gaze on my insides)
and I found myself so naked
that I felt I was a convict
prisoner of all fears.

shadow, shadow
that makes me true

I’m a great fan of your stuff, but I’m not so sure about this one. The English language reflects the ironic sense of humour for which its speakers are famous (or infamous). The French are ready to accept a series of ideas floated in their direction without expecting them to coalesce into a coherent whole. It’s part of what makes them French :). It’s enough that it sounds like it’s saying something. English speakers tend to look for something concrete to emerge from all the pretty words. Maybe we are more cynical.

This is just my view. Others might disagree completely. And most of what I say should be ignored for the health and sanity of all those exposed to it.

Having said all that, personally I like it.

[ Edited: 03 November 2017 05:37 PM by Gavin Sinclair]
 
     
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Nov 03, 2017, 07:09 PM

I think I understand what you’re saying. I will have to restrain my creative impulses and get my lyrics to be as they have to be before dressing them with my music. My impatience does not help me.
Thank you very much for your time, which now I know is gold.
Be well.
Mora

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Nov 04, 2017, 10:38 AM

One dark day I lost my shadow, walking a lonely road
Then I became a whisp of cloud
Among a neverending storm
Among a neverending storm

Shadow, shadow
That makes me true

Emotion swirling from inside
Convict of life, numbered by years
Now left naked in the rain
A prisoner of all fears

Shadow, shadow
That makes me true

Be well…...

 
     
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Nov 04, 2017, 07:24 PM

Hi Mora do you have recording without video, sounds okay but your seeing what your seeing.

 
     
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Nov 05, 2017, 07:30 AM
JAPOV - 04 November 2017 10:38 AM

Emotion swirling from inside
Convict of life, numbered by years
Now left naked in the rain
A prisoner of all fears

 

Hi Japov, love this! Thank you. Mora

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Nov 05, 2017, 07:32 AM
Patrick F - 04 November 2017 07:24 PM

Hi Mora do you have recording without video, sounds okay but your seeing what your seeing.

Yes, Patrick, I have the recording without video but I do not have soundcloud, I always prefer music+image.
Thanks for the comment.
Mora

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Nov 07, 2017, 08:50 AM
Mora Amaro - 05 November 2017 07:30 AM
JAPOV - 04 November 2017 10:38 AM

Emotion swirling from inside
Convict of life, numbered by years
Now left naked in the rain
A prisoner of all fears

 

Hi Japov, love this! Thank you. Mora

:)

 
     
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Emotion swirling from inside
Convict of life, numbered by years
Now left naked in the rain
A prisoner of all fears

 

Hi Japov, love this! Thank you. Mora

:)

Hi Japov, please sorry for my delay in answering you. This year is being terrible. My father, my aunt and finally my mother 2 days ago. Thank you for your suggestions.

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Dec 31, 2017, 01:44 PM

My goodness Mora, I’m truly sorry to hear that… that’s quite a blow all in one year.
I would guess that your parents were very close though :)

 
     
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Dec 31, 2017, 02:30 PM

So sorry to hear that, Mora. 2017 has been a bad year for a lot of people, but you seem to have had it really bad. Let’s hope that 2018 is better for all of us.

Sending best wishes to Spain. (Also sending my daughter in a couple of weeks.)

 
     
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Dec 31, 2017, 10:04 PM

Your videos are so artful. Always a pleasure to watch.

Marcus Nalgaber does well. He relates to your particular arrangement, mood, Melody. The percussion too is nuanced and compliments the whole.

I raise my glass to a happier New Year. The road goes forward. Follow it.

There will always be another song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? http://www.garyeandrews.com

 
     
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JAPOV - 31 December 2017 01:44 PM

My goodness Mora, I’m truly sorry to hear that… that’s quite a blow all in one year.
I would guess that your parents were very close though :)

Many thanks @JAPOV, I am conscient Life is a gift, I can not waste it. Feliz Año Nuevo.

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Gavin Sinclair - 31 December 2017 02:30 PM

So sorry to hear that, Mora. 2017 has been a bad year for a lot of people, but you seem to have had it really bad. Let’s hope that 2018 is better for all of us.

Sending best wishes to Spain. (Also sending my daughter in a couple of weeks.)

Yes, I know, there are a lot of people suffering for terrible things in their lives, my sadness is natural, but I am tired. Nevertheless I’m lucky to love music and art, a wonderful refuge to stay alive. Sure your daughter will discover a lot of interesting things.
Feliz Año Nuevo Gavin.

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Gary E. Andrews - 31 December 2017 10:04 PM

Your videos are so artful. Always a pleasure to watch.

Marcus Nalgaber does well. He relates to your particular arrangement, mood, Melody. The percussion too is nuanced and compliments the whole.

I raise my glass to a happier New Year. The road goes forward. Follow it.

Hola Gary, thank you very much for watching and commenting. It makes me happy you like my works, really.
Feliz Año Nuevo.

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