Danielle

 
       
 
Nov 13, 2017, 02:40 PM

Here’s one from way back in ‘88 lol. In fact John Evans may appreciate this….
(Danielle was the girl from Allentown) :)
OK, give me the usual everybody… so I can be a one hit wonder and die happy! :)
Have a listen…
https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/player.cfm?type=single&songid=13654599&q=hi&newref=1

So you think you’re a heartbreaker, a vixen I should fear and shead no tears
Not a typical beauty, you see right through me, and you don’t want to fall in love this time
Don’t rose tint your world babe and refuse to see
It can happen to you

So you’ve been in love before, you’ve seen it come and watched it go
So you’ve learned sometimes love don’t last forever
Don’t rose tint your world babe and refuse to see
It can happen to you

Well I’m not innocent and I’m not shy, and I won’t be afraid of what could or couldn’t be
But rest assured my heart wouldn’t break for less than you
Danielle
Don’t rose tint your world babe and refuse to see
It can happen to you

Well I’ve been in love before, It touched my heart and made me cry
But I still need love like I need you, Danielle don’t make this another good-bye
Don’t rose tint your world babe and refuse to see
It can happen to you

 
     
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Nov 13, 2017, 08:54 PM

Hello T,

You know I’m a fan, and I like this.  Have you considered a follow through at the end of each verse, like you did with the last verse, ( or similar to the last verse)?

Example:
Don’t rose tint your world babe and refuse to see,
it can happen to you it could happen to me.
Don’t rose tint your world babe and refuse to see,
it could happen to you like it happened to me - Danielle.

Just a thought, either way I still like it, Kudos.  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

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Nov 13, 2017, 10:05 PM

LOL, I just chopped all that out to shorten it up! :)

 
     
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Nov 13, 2017, 11:20 PM

LOL, somehow I kinda figured that first time I listened, but I just couldn’t help mentioning it.  This piece sounds like a rock ballad, most of which go 4 1/2 to 5 min., not quite sure but I believe this goes somewhere in that time frame.  Die hard rock fans would surely listen for that time and love it.  All comes down to what you want it to be.  Again either way, I like it.  Best wishes,

Speak soon

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