Her song

 
       
 
Dec 07, 2017, 03:40 PM

Verse1:
Her song
The only song I hear
Her song
The only track to living

Chorus:
Living by her song
Anything she says I must abide
Living by the sound
Of her blaring thru with a new chance

Verse2:
Her song
The reason that I move
Her song
Guiding my every groove

Bridge:
And she comes towards me
I can say I’m saved
And she comes towards me
Absolving past errs

[ Edited: 10 December 2017 04:10 PM by B chavez]
 
     
B chavez Joined Nov 27, 2017
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Dec 07, 2017, 04:10 PM

Hello B Chavez,

Good to see you again.  I have read each set of lyrics you have posted, and each has V1, Chorus, V2.  This can be viewed as a simple structure, or an unfinished composition by the reader.  Each set of lyrics I have read is abstract in my mind, though I believe it means something special to you, it is difficult for me, being one of your audience, to understand exactly what you are trying to say.  I don’t know if you play an instrument or if you compose the music for your lyrics, perhaps it might help if you had music for your lyrics posted as a song in the Tune Topics.  If you don’t have music, it might be helpful to find someone to collaborate with to compose the music.  Good luck and Best wishes,

Speak soon

Music is an international language, say it with a song.

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Dec 07, 2017, 05:24 PM

Oh! Ok

 
     
B chavez Joined Nov 27, 2017
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Dec 07, 2017, 05:32 PM

I have no working mic. But I’m only missing a few things which I’m gonna buy this week

 
     
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