New Years Eve

 
       
 
Jan 08, 2018, 11:42 PM

Hello guys;

I rewrote the new years song.. Any crit-eec or advice??

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( Title = New Years Eve )

(entry music)

should we all do tequila shots , with a dash of salt and lime
behind our backs our fingers crossed , when we tell a fib or lie

should old aquaintance be forgot , and never brought to mind
we party with tequila shots , and a dash of salt and lime

and should our new years eve this year , turn into a valentine
tequila shot we drink it down, with a dash of salt and lime
 
and should our new years eve dinner , be one of pork or of ham
we count the types of resolut’ , and mine is to save the land

should we all do tequila shots , with a dash of salt and lime
we’re counting up the shots we did , as we suck a wedge of lime

should we all meet on new years eve , for a party at the end
as the new year is ringing in , i party with my friends

should we all do tequila shots , with a dash of salt and lime
we’re ringing in another year , and the cheer you can’t confine

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315 W. Carrillo St. #104
Santa Barbara, Ca. 93101 U.S.A

 
     
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Jan 13, 2018, 10:40 PM

Not a lot of people are tequila drinkers , so i re-wrote it to be about beer..

( Genre = ??? )

( Title = New Years Eve )

( entry music )

should we all drink another beer , for the passing of yule-tide
we’re ringing in another year , and with cheer we all imbibe

and should our new years eve dinner , be of pork or country ham
they sailed all the oceans blue , and here’s a toast to the land

and should our new years eve this year , turn into a valentine
we count our blessings as we go , i’ll be hers and she’ll be mine

should we ring in another year , as the old one passes by
and we all drink another beer , to give the new year a try

( music )


should we all drink another beer , for the passing of yule-tide
we’re ringing in another year , and with cheer we all imbibe

should we all meet on new years eve , for a party at the end
as the new year is ringing in, i party with my friends

should we all meet on new years eve , drinking beer and shots and wine
we’re at the bar on new years eve , and we’re having a good time

we’re ringing in another year , as the old one slides on by
we’re drinking beer and shots and wine , it’s a way to get us by
( music )

should we all drink another beer , for the passing of yule-tide
we’re ringing in another year , and with cheer we all imbibe

( exit music )

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315 W. Carrillo St. #104
Santa Barbara, Ca. 93101 U.S.A.

 
     
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Jan 15, 2018, 07:36 PM

Hello Guys;

I tinkered and tinkered with it , and i think it’s finally done , to my satisfaction..

( Genre = ??? )

( Title = New Years Eve )

( entry music )

should we all drink another beer , for the passing of yule-tide
we’re ringing in another year , and with cheer we all imbibe

and should our new years eve dinner , be of pork or country ham
they sailed cross the ocean blue , and here’s a toast to the land

and should our new years eve this year , turn into a valentine
we count our blessings as we go , i’ll be hers and she’ll be mine

we’re ringing in another year , as the old one passes by
and with a cheer we drink a beer, as the hour hand goes high

( music )

should we all drink another beer , for the passing of yule-tide
we’re ringing in another year , and with cheer we all imbibe

should we all meet on new years eve , for a party at the end
as the new year is ringing in, have you got a cheer to lend

should we all meet on new years eve , drinking beer and shots and wine
we’re waiting for the ball to drop , with a taste of bubbly wine

should we ring in another year , with a cheer a shout a cry
we’re drinking beer and shots and wine , as the old year passes by

( music )

should we all drink another beer , for the passing of yule-tide
we’re ringing in another year , and with cheer we all imbibe

( exit music )

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Albert Redditt
315 W. Carrillo St. #104
Santa Barbara, Ca. 93101 U.S.A.

 
     
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