Walking

 
       
 
Jan 09, 2018, 06:10 AM

My feet are walking
My feet are doing the talking
My feet are walking
Time not to follow the crowd


Time to walk in the opposite direction
Heart and soul now live by their own discretion
And I am so scared
Did I forget to mention
Did I
Forget to mention

 


Blown by the wind
Finding something so deep with in
With every thought that I am cought
Something new to the table is brought
Time not to follow the crowd

 

 


Time to walk in the opposite direction
Heart and soul now live by their own discretion
And I am so scared
Did I forget to mention
Did I
Forget to mention

 


I find myself getting up off the floor
More times than I have fallen
All that is in front of me is all that I can see
What is behind me is well and truly forgotten
Well and truly
Forgotten
Time not to follow the crowd

 

Heart and soul at their own discretion
Now walking in the opposite direction
My feet are walking
My feet do the talking
My feet are walking
Time to walk in the opposite direction
Heart and soul now live by their own discretion
Time not to follow the crowd
Time to walk in the opposite direction
Heart and soul now live by their own discretion

[ Edited: 10 January 2018 07:01 PM by Mark Smith]
 
     
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Jan 09, 2018, 03:38 PM

Hello Mark. Welcome to the Forum. Glad you found us.

I really like the lines…

Heart and soul at their own discretion
Now walking in the opposite direction

...so much so that I find myself wishing they were more central to the song perhaps as part of the chorus. For most songs, the chorus should be the stand out moment of the piece (that and the bridge). Those two lines definitely stand out!

Jen

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Jan 10, 2018, 07:04 PM

Hi Jenny I took what you said into consideration and rejig the lyrics hope you like it.

Mark

 
     
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