YOU’RE NEVER ALONE

 
       
 
Jan 10, 2018, 05:22 PM

P.S.: not done


YOU’RE NEVER ALONE
everytime you feel like running away
don´t be scared don´t go
i´m on my way
I´m sorry if I ever made you doubt
don´t go you can scream and you can shout
but don´t leave it all behind

CHORUS
Cause you’re never
aloooooone
you’re never
aloooooooone
you’re never alone

all the promises we ever made
are not over didn´t go away
it´s time to be yourself
don´t worry bout nobody else

we make the life we wanna live
so tell me
you want us to be

CHORUS
Cause you’re never
aloooooone
you’re never
aloooooooone
you’re never alone

[ Edited: 11 January 2018 02:01 PM by Gabriela Barreto]

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Jan 10, 2018, 05:44 PM

I like this song it has a Cold play feel to it and I can imagine the band playing this one. Keep up the good work

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Jan 11, 2018, 07:50 AM
Mark Smith - 10 January 2018 05:44 PM

I like this song it has a Cold play feel to it and I can imagine the band playing this one. Keep up the good work

Mark

Hey Mark! thks! When I was writing it I imagined 1D singing it. It’s funny though, all lyrics I write I imagine a singer or band playing it.

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Jan 11, 2018, 09:22 AM

Good point, Gabriela. I think that if you don’t imagine a singer singing what you write, it will turn out to be a poem, rather than a song lyric.

One minor point. I wouldn’t mention it if it wasn’t right there in the title, but you mean “You’re Never Alone,” not “Your Never Alone.”

 
     
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Jan 11, 2018, 10:16 AM

Lol, even your avatar screams “high-school” English teacher Gav….. :)

Why am I always the one coaxing people to sing?!? I’d like to hear what’s
in your head Gabriela :)

 
     
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Jan 11, 2018, 01:51 PM
Gavin Sinclair - 11 January 2018 09:22 AM

Good point, Gabriela. I think that if you don’t imagine a singer singing what you write, it will turn out to be a poem, rather than a song lyric.

One minor point. I wouldn’t mention it if it wasn’t right there in the title, but you mean “You’re Never Alone,” not “Your Never Alone.”

Yeah Gavin, that´s for sure!

Oh god! That sure isn´t “minor”! thanks for pointing that out. English is my second language so these silly mistakes are always hunting me.

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Jan 11, 2018, 01:58 PM
JAPOV - 11 January 2018 10:16 AM

Lol, even your avatar screams “high-school” English teacher Gav….. :)

Why am I always the one coaxing people to sing?!? I’d like to hear what’s
in your head Gabriela :)

Hey JAPOV! I am actually in high-school 😂😂

I wish there was a way! I don’t sing at all!! I tried once and it was a complete disaster.

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Jan 11, 2018, 02:00 PM
Gavin Sinclair - 11 January 2018 09:22 AM

Good point, Gabriela. I think that if you don’t imagine a singer singing what you write, it will turn out to be a poem, rather than a song lyric.

One minor point. I wouldn’t mention it if it wasn’t right there in the title, but you mean “You’re Never Alone,” not “Your Never Alone.”

Fixed it!

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Jan 11, 2018, 06:11 PM

Don’t worry, Gabriela, lots of folks with English as their first language make the same mistake!

Tony, please look more closely. I never taught English in high school, although I did teach it for a year at a university in Germany. I thought that would have been clear from the avatar.

 
     
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