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Jan 10, 2018, 11:25 PM

Static

It’s those quiet times I feel it cruelly
when there’s no escape away
a moment of no solace
And I just have to face it
but these tired tears just keep getting in the way

‘Cause everyday
is a day that’s not spent with you
every place
is some where that i’m not with you
And every face
is someone who’ll never replace you

We’re at the end of our world
where there is no turning back
it’s really too late
there is no time to spare
You just had to go
when I was not there,
so that I’ll never get to say goodbye

As the memories begin their journey
to gently fade away
they come back with such violence
That shakes my soul and fills it
with an ache that just won’t be allayed

Though in my soul
lives the hope that we will meet again
and in my mind
lives the knowledge that this pain can end
but in my heart
lives the crushing weight of boundless regret

We’re at the end of our world
where there is no turning back
It’s really too late
there is no time to spare.
Why did you go
when I’m not there?
I’ll never get to say goodbye

If I could see that face,
as it truly was
just one more time
i’d would give anything
to say three more words to you
I’d give everything
just tell me what to do

Are we at the end of our world
where there is no turning back?
Is it really too late?
Is there no time to spare?

For I’d relive everyday
with every hurt
and every heartache
just to be with you
(for that final time)
even if it’s just to say goodbye

[ Edited: 10 January 2018 11:33 PM by David Raphael]
 
     
David Raphael Joined Jan 10, 2018
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Jan 11, 2018, 11:50 AM

Hello David,

Good to see you here, Welcome to SW101.  I’m just a little curious, you have posted in the Collaborate Forum, but you really don’t say what type of collaboration you want.  Are you looking for someone to compose the music, are you looking for someone to help with the lyrics?  It would help to let us know what you are looking for.  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon,

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Deacon Joined Aug 30, 2009
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Jan 11, 2018, 04:29 PM

Oh hello.  A total noob to music, but I’m looking to realize this song to a demo level. I have much of this song in my head (pretty much 100% of the melody and maybe 30% instrumentals, lyrics could be tweaked a little, and I may need a better title or have it incorporated in the song ). The instrumentals especially need to be committed and fleshed out. I would sing it myself, but I’m probably like one of those Idol contestants at the start of every season…
  All in all I just want to see in anyone gets the vision and ambition of this song and will believe in it.

[ Edited: 11 January 2018 04:39 PM by David Raphael]
 
     
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Jan 11, 2018, 04:50 PM

Lots of musicians here David, go ahead and sing it!!! :)

 
     
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