Texas Twister

 
       
 
Feb 12, 2018, 08:29 AM

Hi Y’all

This is a song that I wrote in summer 2017, it was one of those that I could not think of a melody nor lyric, so it sat there doing nothing.

I then early this year I had a rare spark of inspiration, I thought it sounded like a ‘50 High School film song, so I cobbled some lyrics together in that mood, did a demo, of course an English bloke singing didn’t fit.

I was fortunate to collaborate with a Texan singer, who kindly helped. Thanks to her.

Hope you like it….Let me know what you think

https://soundcloud.com/cowparsleyman/texas-twister-2018

I just want to say that since i have been a part of this forum, your comments have really inspired and helped me get a focus, thanks VERY MUCH, your frankness and honesty are so valuable.

Rich

 
     
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Feb 12, 2018, 05:30 PM

Fun song! Solid structure n concept!
I think your singer would do better if you moved this up to F or G though :)

 
     
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Feb 13, 2018, 04:21 AM

Thanks Japov, I can do something with it, I also think it should be at least 5 bpm faster…

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Feb 13, 2018, 07:55 PM

Nice vibe to it! Enjoyable to listen to. Good job!

 
     
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Feb 14, 2018, 04:52 AM

Hi Carroll, thanks for the listen and feedback, everything is carefully noted.

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Feb 17, 2018, 06:34 PM

Love the melody and rhythm

 
     
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Feb 18, 2018, 05:11 AM
bill kamen - 17 February 2018 06:34 PM

Love the melody and rhythm

Thanks Bill, glad you like it.

Rich

 
     
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