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Feb 13, 2018, 06:03 PM

#ThankYou

( hook )

I wanna say thank you for all the best times that I’ve ever had/-
An I wanna say I’m sorry for all the times that I left you mad/- babe
you were my best friend an you were always the best at that/-
So thank you cause now all I want, is to be a better man/-

I wanna say thank you for all the times that you had my back/-
I wanna say I’m sorry for all the nights that I Left you sad/-
Babe you were my best friend and you were
always the best at that/-
So I wanna say thank you! Because of you I’ve now become a better man!

( Verse 1 )

You have to admit we could both feel the force within-us/-
You can’t force these sorts of feelins or it’ll cause em to finish/-

My whole existence summed up all in a sentence/-
I love you crawled through these halls an in the hallways it whispered/-

Head over heels so through the states, of course we just drifted/-
Sadly on course we grew distant An further we drifted/-

Further in the distance- memories turn just into blurred little visions/-
Until all that were left with is a passion burnt deep in the core of our existence/-

An I miss this, I miss you,  I miss us An I’m willing to fix things /-
You hate my lifestyle an I ###### hate this distance/-
You think my friends are addicts An I know your friends are different/-

Now I only see you when I sleep and your its all when I’m wishin/-
I get lost in my thoughts that form the walls of this prison/-

Just know Always I miss you,  an that we’ve been through/-
Always I’ll need you, babe I know there’s more that we can get through!

But I just gotta say/-

( chorus )

Thank you for all the best times that I’ve ever had/-
An I wanna say I’m sorry for the times that I left you sad/-
Baby your my best friend an you were always the best at that/-
So I wanna say thank you- because of you I’ve now become a better man!

Yo I wanna say thank you for all the times that you had my back/-
An I wanna say I’m sorry for all the nights that I left you mad/-
Baby your my best friend and you were always the best at that/-
So I wanna say thank you! Because of you I’ve now become a better man/-

( Verse 2 how writing make me feel )

She’s the place I go when #### gets real- just to sit an chill- the only one I trust- when feelings slip n spill/

She just feels so bliss n still- it’s almost make believe, but this shits so real/
She’s Warm like a Christmas chill -which makes me feel small like a big kids meal/

All my problems gone like the 50’s films- never nothin awkward like how your first wristy feels/

She’s a blessing in disguise - truly my angel without wings/
She’ll be forever in my life - she took my heart an it hasn’t been put down since/

I’ll trust her with anything - an she’ll push me until I’m the crowned king/
She showed me my potential -an now I’ve never had a doubt since/
Yo-
This is more than lust- more then love- baby what this is passion/
This is all a rush- all the luck - baby this is all a talent/
I’ve done this all for us an all that’s ever happened/-
Move past all the sluts, All the drugs an I’ve ###### off all the addicts/-
Your my rush, all I want babe your my naughty little habbit/-

So I gotta say/-

Thank you for all the best times that I’ve ever had/-
An I wanna say I’m sorry for the times that I left you sad/-
Baby your my best friend an you were always the best at that/-
So I wanna say thank you- because of you I’ve now become a better man!

Yo I wanna say thank you for all the times that you had my back/-
An I wanna say I’m sorry for all the nights that I left you mad/-
Baby your my best friend and you were always the best at that/-
So I wanna say thank you! Because of you I’ve now become a better man/-

( Verse 3 past girlfriends )

Look in any minute I could see I picked the short stump/-
Her words were like fists man an I could feel my jaw crunch/-
It took me years to go an put these walls up An the minute you walked in- all dumped/-
The first time in my life I was thinkin with my shorts up/-

But in time you became ooooover obsessive An I became ooooover protective/-
Baby stop sweating I’m just ooover the questions sick of being schooled I’m over the lesson/-
I know I’m deceptive, you know your sensitive, I miss my girl am sick of answering questions like your my stay at home dectective/-

So chill

Kick back loosen up, roll a spliff shoot some darts/-
Soon enough we’ll be done, cheers for coming though it’s been fun/-

Thank you! For all the best times I never had-
An thank you! For being a right #### when you met my dad/-
An Thank you for making me question who I really am/-
We gave it a shot an I’m leavin the ###### second I get a chance/-

An babe I wanna say thank you for sticking that knife straight in my back/-
An I wanna say I’m sorry for living a life that I ###### hate that I had/-
You used to be my best friend now being strangers is where we at/-
Still though I’ve gotta say thank you because of all ah that now I know who I really am/-

Thank you-

 
     
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