Positively Good!!! :)

 
       
 
Apr 23, 2018, 08:57 PM

I’ll brush my teeth and smile
I’ll even comb my hair
Drink my breakfast without complaint
And act like I still care
I’ll get to work on time
So my boss knows that I’m grateful
Compliment her big fat ###
For being so damn hateful

I’ll dance and sing
Throughout the day
Like everybody should
Belching sunshine and
Farting rainbows
Because I’m feeling
You know I’m feeling
Positively good

I’ll tuck in my shirt
And try to watch my weight
I’ll never fail to tell you
To have a pleasant day
I’ll be a perfect roll model
And never tell a lie
Marching heal to toe for status quo
Till I finally ####### die

 
     
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Apr 23, 2018, 09:41 PM

Life summed up in 2 verses and a chorus!

 
     
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Apr 23, 2018, 09:43 PM

Simplicity is key lol :)

 
     
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Apr 23, 2018, 09:47 PM

I found a tune for the first verse and chorus, but only “Never tell a lie” and “‘Till I !@#$%^& die” are the only rhymes that work together in the last verse and stick with the rhythm, but you probably have an idea about what you’re doing with that.

God Bless America
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God Bless Country
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God Bless the USMC

 
     
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Apr 23, 2018, 09:54 PM

Not really, just scribbling….. I just hear a lot of irony in the vocal! Like “Epic” Faith No More… Roll with it if you got something!  :)

 
     
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Apr 23, 2018, 10:01 PM

Tony, nobody does grumpy old cuss like you. Love it. How about an ironically jaunty melody? Like smiling through clenched teeth.

“Belching sunshine and farting rainbows” Such poetry.

 
     
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Apr 23, 2018, 10:07 PM

Precisely! “Through clenched teeth!” Since you’re the earl of jaunt, why don’t you n Josh team up! :)

 
     
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Apr 24, 2018, 12:38 PM

BTW Gavin, please feel free to play with this, I like the way you say things too :)

 
     
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Apr 24, 2018, 05:21 PM

It’s tempting. I’m not usually very good at collaborating because words and melody tend to come to me at the same time, but I’ll let it marinate in my head and see if anything happens.

Earl of Jaunt? I’ve been called worse.

 
     
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