Down on me

 
       
 
May 04, 2018, 06:47 PM

Down on me
Verse
I’ve caused a lot of trouble.
Made a ton of misery.
I’ve hurt a lot of people.
Got a list of enemies.
Pre chorus
Got it coming and I know it.
Don’t feel bad for me.
Got it coming I deserve it
Know it has to be.
Chorus
What comes around goes around.
Now it’s down on me.
It’s coming down, coming down,
Coming down on me.
Verse
I’ve lied and I’ve hurt people.
I’ve left lives in disarray.
Many have sworn their vengeance.
Come a time I’ll have to pay.
Bridge
The snowfalls built up above me
On the mountainside.
One day the levee’s gonna break.
Bury me alive.
Verse
I’ve caused a lot of trouble.
Made a ton of misery.
I’ve hurt a lot of people.
Got a list of enemies.
Pre chorus
Got it coming and I know it.
Don’t feel bad for me.
Got it coming I deserve it
Know it has to be.
Chorus
What comes around goes around.
Now it’s down on me.
It’s coming down, coming down,
Coming down on me.

 
     
carroll kiphen Joined Feb 22, 2016
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Jul 03, 2018, 07:48 PM

Hi Carroll,
I have put some music on your lyrics DOWN ON ME. Here is the result.
You can do what you want with it. If you don’t like it, just ignore it.

Hereafter, 4 files of the song that you can download and keep for your records:

mp3 file: comingdownonme.mp3 (instrumental)
https://app.box.com/s/ac6j93ucitijlglx8wpdqp3q0ombwh5k

midi file: comingdownonme.mid
https://app.box.com/s/e6z78l95u9d6rikuer88f1nfhsm2om8c

pdf file: comingdownonme_lead.pdf (lead sheet music)
https://app.box.com/s/rm3x1bet02rcuom8p0ysd7ydri6f9q8b

mp3 file: comingdownonmeuke.mp3 (my voice + ukulele)
https://app.box.com/s/g7923ofofkuc3yi2hu0hnu4bp4ju91rr

Coming Down On Me (#331)
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© Lyrics: Carroll Kiphen, 2018.
© Music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2018.
Structure: i8 A8 B8 C8 A8 B8 C8 D8 i8 A8 B8 C8 t5
Length: 3:24, Tempo: 120, Key: E
Melody: may 2018. Lyrics: may 2018.

Intro: 8 bars (Chords: I=E, 6m=c#m, IV=A, V7=B7)
(I)1_151_5_/(6m)66_16_~/(IV)11_41_6_/(V7)2__~~/
(I)1_151_5_/(6m)66_16_~/(IV)11_4(V7)2_7_/(I)1__~~/

(I)‘I’ve caused a lot of /(6m)trouble /  (‘3313_1_/31_’~~/) <== verse 8 bars
(IV)‘Made a ton of mise-/(V7)ry /  (‘1_61616/5__~~/)
(I)‘I’ve hurt a lot of /(6m)people /  (‘3313_1_/31_’~~/)
(IV)‘Got a (V7)list of ene-/(I)mies /  (‘1_62727/1__~~/)

(IV)‘Got it coming and I /(V7)know it /  (‘4_14141/42_’~~/) <== pre chorus 8 bars
(V7)‘Don’t feel bad for /me /  (‘5_42_7_/2__~~/)
(IV)‘Got it coming I de-/(V7)serve it /  (‘4_14141/42_’~~/)
(V7)‘Know it has to /be /  (‘5_42_7_/2__~~/)

(I)‘What comes around goes a-/(6m)round /  (‘3313_13/1__~~/) <== chorus 8 bars
(IV)‘Now it’s down on /(V7)me /  (‘4_14_4_/2__~~/)
(I)‘It’s coming down, coming /(6m)down /  (‘3313_13/1__~~/)
(IV)‘Coming (V7)down on /(I)me / (‘4_42_2_/1__~~/)

(I)‘I’ve lied and I’ve hurt /(6m)people / (‘3313_1_/31_’~~/) <== verse 8 bars
(IV)‘I’ve left lives in disar-/(V7)ray / (‘1_61616/5__~~/)
(I)‘Many have sworn their /(6m)vengeance / (‘3313_1_/31_’~~/)
(IV)‘Come a (V7)time I’ll have to /(I)pay / (‘1_62727/1__~~/)

Repeat pre chorus 8 bars & chorus 8 bars

(6m)The snowfalls built up a-/bove me / (1_61_616/1_6_~~/) <== bridge 8 bars
(IV)On the mountain-/(V7)side /  (1_6_1_6_/5__~~/)
(6m)‘One day the levee’s gonna /break /  (‘1161616/3__~~/)
(IV)Bury me a-/(V7)live /  (1_6_1_6_/2__~~/)

Instrumental: repeat intro (8 bars)

(I)‘I’ve caused a lot of /(6m)trouble /  (‘3313_1_/31_’~~/) <== verse 8 bars
(IV)‘Made a ton of mise-/(V7)ry /  (‘1_61616/5__~~/)
(I)‘I’ve hurt a lot of /(6m)people /  (‘3313_1_/31_’~~/)
(IV)‘Got a (V7)list of ene-/(I)mies /  (‘1_62727/1__~~/)

Repeat pre chorus 8 bars & chorus 8 bars

(IV)‘Coming (V7)down on /(I)me / (‘4_42_2_/1__~~/)
(IV)‘Coming (V7)down on /(I)me / (‘4_42_2_/1__~~/)
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Have fun!

 
     
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Jul 04, 2018, 09:09 PM

Thanks Ray. I appreciate your hard work.

 
     
carroll kiphen Joined Feb 22, 2016
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