Where The Train Moves Slow

 
       
 
May 06, 2018, 05:37 PM

Thanks in advance for listening. Cheers!! ::))

https://soundcloud.com/user172366610/where-the-train-moves-slow

If it works, then it’s good.

 
     
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Donald Mix Joined Aug 26, 2017
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May 06, 2018, 06:29 PM

Hey Donald, I like your sound and your voice has an authenticity that works well with the song. Do you think it could do with a little variety musically? A chorus? It seems to consist pretty much of the same two lines repeated.

Enjoyed it.

 
     
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Gavin Sinclair Joined Dec 02, 2014
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May 06, 2018, 10:04 PM

Hello Donald,

Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed this song very much very soothing.  I will respectfully disagree with Gavin, though I understand where he is coming from, the hook is covered very well, the story line is complete, and the instrumental mid song is well placed, kudos.  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon,

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Deacon Joined Aug 30, 2009
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May 11, 2018, 12:39 AM

Absolutely beautiful rhythm…..a gorgeous sound. Your voice…the guitars, and beat…….I tip my cowboy hat to you, sir. I didn’t mind the melodic and rhythmic repetitiveness, even though some will……...a beautiful sound!
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Oh…..an outstanding title!!! ;-)

 
     
Tom Tognaci 2 Joined Sep 26, 2006
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