::: Always Be Mine :::

 
       
 
Jun 04, 2018, 07:17 PM

Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13736456

ALWAYS BE MINE
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© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2018.
All rights reserved: Guy E. Trépanier.

Nota: female version easy to adapt (girl = man, She = He)

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Intro: 8 bars (key of E)

Nobody’s gonna flirt with my girl
Nobody’s gonna do it once
Nobody’s gonna flirt with my girl
Nobody’s gonna do it once
She has promised me
She will always be mine ....

Nobody’s gonna dance with my girl
Nobody’s gonna do it once
Nobody’s gonna dance with my girl
Nobody’s gonna do it once
She has promised me
She will always be mine ....

Instrumental: 8 bars

Nobody’s gonna rock with my girl
Nobody’s gonna do it once
Nobody’s gonna rock with my girl
Nobody’s gonna do it once
She has promised me
She will always be mine ....

She has promised me
She will always be mine ....


Guy E. Trépanier #320
Melody: march 2018. Lyrics: march 2018.

[ Edited: 12 July 2018 12:52 PM by Guy E. Trépanier]
 
     
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Jun 06, 2018, 10:22 PM

Hello Guy. You know that I always look forward to listening to your lyrics/songs because they’re so upbeat. Unfortunately, this song didn’t make me smile like your others do (which is a first for me). My issue with this song comes from my experience as a woman. I have dated my share of domineering, overbearing, jealous-type men to know that THIS man, is one I’d run from.

Despite the song being delivered in a positive way, the underlying meaning to a woman is “you are mine and no one else is going to come near you.” To a woman, that’s a big fat red flag. Even if that wasn’t your intended meaning, I suspect the majority of women would interpret it that way.

Jen

https://soundcloud.com/jennystokes-nz
http://www.evansandstokes.com

“One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain”
- Bob Marley

 
     
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Jul 03, 2018, 07:42 PM

Many thanks for listening and commenting.

If someone is interested by the chord progression,
click this link (one page pdf file):

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