Reasoning fails

 
       
 
Jun 06, 2018, 11:08 PM

Verse1:
Reasoning fails
When she moves my way
Reasoning errs
All she does exactly

Chorus:
What I need
What I seek
Trying against
Doesn’t work

Verse2:
Reasoning marred
All too close kills rationale
Reasoning marred
I can’t live without red move

 
     
B chavez Joined Nov 27, 2017
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Jun 07, 2018, 10:13 AM

Reasoning fails
when she moves my way
Reasoning errs
when I see her sway

Im hypnotized by her eyes
She’s got me in her sights
I’m mystified by her smile
I can’t put up a fight.

I’m falling, falling falling
Loves calling out my name.
I’m falling, falling, falling
and I cant walk away.

Reasoning fails
When she moves my way
Reasoning errs
When I see her sway.

Upside down I’m turned around
I’m ten feet off the ground.
I’m powerless, I’m powerless
When she comes around.

I’m hypnotized by her eyes
She’s got me in her sights.
I’m mystified by her smile
I can’t put up a fight.

I’m falling, falling, falling
Loves calling out my name.
I’m falling, falling, falling
And I can’t walk away.

[ Edited: 07 June 2018 10:33 AM by carroll kiphen]
 
     
carroll kiphen Joined Feb 22, 2016
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Jun 07, 2018, 01:24 PM

Hey great lyrics. Thanks

 
     
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Jun 07, 2018, 10:49 PM

I don’t know why I went with red move. In the previous line I was talking about killing rationale

 
     
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Jun 08, 2018, 07:33 AM

Too ambiguous.  Your audience needs to understand and relate to the lyrics. Even better if than can imagine themselves being the character.

 
     
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Jun 08, 2018, 01:21 PM

Just trying to be poetic but it doesn’t always work

 
     
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