I Found An Angel

 
       
 
Jun 10, 2018, 11:17 AM

“I Found an Angel” is my May 2018 song. Feel free to give feed back.

Cheers,
Terry


https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/29629974-i-found-an-angel

As I look out my window - I can see the sun
I could look up and see - the stars that shine at night
And when I see her eyes - I see all heavens done
I found an angel - much to my delight

Chorus

I found an Angel

With long brown hair and hazel eyes
I found an angel
With a smile that compares with heavens sky
The stars the moon the sun and all the rest
I found and Angel - she fits right in with heavens best

I have walked through a meadow of perfect flowers
I have climbed a maintain - with trees that touch the sky
And when I see your face - I know all heavens power
I found an angel - this I won’t deny

Repeat chorus

Now some may say - she’s just not real
I’m just a silly fool who lost his mind
But when she’s in my arms - it’s heaven that I feel

 
     
Terry Carroll Joined Dec 21, 2016
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Jun 10, 2018, 01:40 PM

I enjoyed listening to this Terry. Nice poppy production, as always. What do you think about varying the melody of the verses a little by going up instead of down at the end of line 2? Just a thought.

I like the lyric. A nice, simple, happy love song. Not sure about “this I won’t deny.” Sounds like filler, just to achieve a rhyme.

 
     
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Gavin Sinclair Joined Dec 02, 2014
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