17 yo songwriter - singer

 
       
 
Jun 24, 2018, 09:38 AM

Hi, can ypu judge my songwriting skills? I am 17 yo:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k9dDjY0VNYo

Thank you!

 
     
Daniel Lazar Joined Oct 04, 2015
  • Rank

Send PM

 
Jun 24, 2018, 10:40 AM

Hi Daniel. I think there’s a decent song in there, but the arrangement doesn’t do it any favors. Just when your ear is getting into the groove,it changes to something else. I also think it needs more backing to support the melody than that rhythmic hand clap effect, or, at least, it would be easier to get into if it had more. For me, the best bit is the beginning.

Just my opinion, which is probably not worth a whole lot, when it comes to this type of song. For what it’s worth, I think there’s a lot of potential here.

 
     
Avatar
Gavin Sinclair Joined Dec 02, 2014
  • Rank
  • Rank
  • Rank
  • Rank

Send PM

 
Aug 24, 2018, 10:23 AM

I listened and this is a first for me this person has a Great voice and this song with a

small amount of polish could be ready to pitch too a Top Publisher or Top record Producer

Many Producers are searching for songs similar to this They then Find the right singer, , and it

could be the one singing here,  Make a great recording and then find a major outlet for the song

Vinyl - C D - Wave etcetera

Great Work.

 
     
Avatar
Peter Kristian Joined Jan 11, 2008
  • Rank
  • Rank
  • Rank
  • Rank

Send PM

 
Aug 24, 2018, 10:25 AM

Thank you, I am also the singer and the songwriter

 
     
Daniel Lazar Joined Oct 04, 2015
  • Rank

Send PM