Kiddie Pools

 
       
 
Jun 26, 2018, 04:39 PM

This is a song i’m working on about being in a relationship were the love isn’t 50/50, more like 20/80 basically lol. Essentially the girl is so in love with the guy, that although she knows he won’t ever act right for her, he pulls her back in so ,  in the chorus, she basically gives in. I need help with the verses though, I’m not sure how to start the song off so help if you can!

The instrumental: https://youtu.be/xFPTDGCxO5k
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Kiddie Pools

Verse 1:


Bridge:

Hook:
Say that you don’t wanna be tied down,
Kinda hard to hide, this soul tie, bound to you,
Pushing away, you pulling me back down,
Drown in your love, swim good
In your kiddie pool
Hook:
Say that you don’t wanna be tied down,
Hard to hide, this soul tie, bound to you,
Pushing away, you pulling me back down,
Drown in your love, swim good
In your kiddie pool
(Outro):
The real hold you down,
you supposed to drown? (right)

[ Edited: 27 June 2018 11:48 AM by sky]
 
     
sky Joined Jun 26, 2018
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Jun 28, 2018, 01:02 PM

I’m so in love I’ve lost my way,can’t find my way home.
Can’t understand who I am, why you’re cold as stone.
It doesn’t mean that much to you to mean that much to me
So you play around, put me Down; why are you so mean?

[ Edited: 28 June 2018 01:55 PM by carroll kiphen]
 
     
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Jul 04, 2018, 07:27 PM

Dip your toes and feel the cold
Jump right in my love is yours
Pull me out and keep me dry
Nothing left inside those eyes

Hold me tight and keep me warm
Save my life i am all yours
Heart is cracking growing old
I’m drowning in this kiddie pool


Not sure if this will help or not, play around with it as you please :)

 
     
Alexander Moore Joined Jul 04, 2018
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